Friday, May 21, 2021

How to take care of four ducks

 Writing Lesson May 17th - Procedural writing. 


Pet Sitting


Purpose: To write instructions for a pet-sitter. 


My Writing goal is: _To use sentences with detail


Success Criteria 



Beginning

Improving

Striving for excellence

  • Say my sentences before writing

  • Leave spaces between words

  • Write all the sounds I can hear in words

  • Write a title

  • List the equipment

  • Write clear instructions

  • Write a title 

  • List the equipment

  • Write clear instructions which explain exactly what to do and when. 

  • Use precise vocabulary


How to take care of four ducks

Food and water:     maize water   

Equipment: one empty cocoa powder 

container 

   1. First you scoop  the maize out with the empty cocoa powder container from the container with the maize in it.

2. Secondly you run down to the duck area and pour the maize out of the container that you are holding.

3.Thirdly grab the hose that is bye the duck area and squirt the water in the tub.


My Tinkercad rocket

Friday, May 7, 2021

Jasper's Surprise

    Jasper's Surprise



                 1. First spread the relish on the bread

               2. Then cut the cheese with a knife and put the cheese on the relish.  

Ingredients:             3.Thirdly plop the pastrami on the cheese.

1 or 2 pieces of Pastrami    4. Chop the tomato on your chopping board with the knife                                       

2 or 3 pieces of cheese          and   put it on.

1 smear of relish                   5. Now put the lettuce on the bread.

1 whole tomato                      6. Lastly put the bread on the top. 

2 or 3 pieces of lettuce

Two pieces of any type of bread

                                                            My writing goal is to add adverbs like carefully.

Equipment:

Knife & chopping board