Persuasive writing
by Jasper Sutherland
Dear chiefs
I would really like to go on the horouta waka to look for new lands. I know some people that are going on the waka and I think I’m one of the best people going on it. here are some of my reasons:
I am going to help with the sails , this following sentence is the detail why I am going to help with the sails. I am really good at climbing, which will help with the pulling of the ropes if they fly loose, I like climbing and I’m not afraid of heights. I like climbing trees and all sorts.
Secondly to build and reaper boats and houses. I like building anything really if you ask me to, and I am good at building things.
Thirdly I like boats and fishing, I love boats and anything that goes on water because I do not get seasick, I will help the horouta waka with their fishing. I like fishing and I have had heaps of experience within and without fishing.
Fourthly, I am a good cook. I love cooking everything, especially cooking over fire and I like cooking new things.
That was my last reason, chiefs I hope you choose me because I know you are the best chiefs, and if you don’t choose me to go on the good waka you will be insulting me.
Yours sincerely Jasper
Hi Jasper nice persuasive writing maybe cos you make the funds the little bit bigger so we can read it but the. writing is really good.
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Hi Jasper nice work but you forgot to put a full stop at the end of the sentence.Really good writing Jasper.
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