Why sport is more important than music
By Jasper Sutherland
This is why I think sport is more important than music. Sport has more exercise, we all run a lot in sport.
Sport is the one thing I like most, there are reasons why sport is more important than music, one of them is that in sport you run heaps but in music you are either sitting down or standing up. You can play sport inside or outside, music calms you down but sport hurrases you and I like being harassed. Sport is in the fresh cold air outside but music is inside in the hot and sticky air.
Music, I like music but I like sports better. One of the downside bits of music is that most of the time that we are outside playing sports other people are playing music. I mean music isn’t bad but more people like sports better than music.
So I hope you got persuaded to think sport is more important than music.
Hi Jasper, awesome piece of writing I aggree I do think sport is better than music. Maybe next time make your fon a little smaller but everything else is amazing😁😀
ReplyDeleteHi Jasper this is a great piece of writing and it has a lot of descriptive language but you could add a bit more detail but otherwise it was great.
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